Stan Consulting · Problem
Website messaging failures almost always have one of three structural causes. The hero describes the team instead of the customer problem. The value proposition uses category-words instead of specific outcomes. Or the voice reads like every other marketing firm because it uses the same five adjectives everyone else does.
Quick answer
Website messaging failures have one of three structural causes: the hero describes the business instead of the customer problem, the value proposition uses category-words instead of specific outcomes, or the voice reads as every-other-marketing-firm. Stan Consulting diagnoses the specific messaging failure in 72 hours via the $999 Conversion Second Opinion.
Structural Causes
The hero says what the team is. The visitor needs to recognize their own commercial situation, not the team biography.
"Produce commercial outcomes" "move your business forward" "unlock potential". Category words do not identify one business. Specific outcomes with numbers do.
If the copy could appear on twenty competitor sites with the logo swapped, it is generic. Specific voice has specific language.
When a diagnostic is warranted
Days the symptom has persisted
If the commercial problem has outlasted a month of in-house investigation, it is structural, not tactical.
Turnaround on the report
Written diagnostic and prioritized fix list delivered within seventy-two hours of granted account access.
Engagement fee, one time
If the weekly cost of the problem exceeds $999, the diagnostic is underpriced against the loss it prevents.
The first fix on the prioritized list is the one with the highest commercial impact at the lowest implementation cost. That is the structural judgment the engagement is paying for.
Common Questions
A copywriter improves sentences. A diagnostic identifies which message architecture has failed and what the replacement needs to do.
A/B headline tests on the homepage. A week of traffic is usually enough to read the directional effect.
A voice document without a commercial message architecture is decoration. The message comes first.
The Engagement Format
$999 · 72-hour written diagnostic · No retainer structure · fee is final on submission before work commences
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